BOLERO
He’ll write a song to my heart
with the rays of the sun
He’ll play that song
softly to my heart
He’ll knock at the door
of my lonely heart
I’ll open it softly
Never to close again
And our souls forever
together will float
on wings of happiness
He’ll write every morning
To me
with his soul’s pen
©AmandavdL 2010
August 1, 2010 at 7:06 am
Wow – this is a phenomenal graphic – very Salvador Dali-ish! Amazing.
Your poem is so beautiful and romantic Amanda – and you perfectly describe what many a girl is looking for. “And our souls forever, together will float, on wings of happiness” – WOW! So well written my friend! 😀 xx
August 1, 2010 at 8:38 am
So happy you enjoyed the graphic…I was not sure at first (with the tears) because the poem is not meant to be sad. Leaning towards hope in my mind!! Love you lots Chloe Mwah mwah mwah xx
August 2, 2010 at 5:05 am
No, I really think it works – your graphics rock! Besides, we often shed tears of joy right? Love you loads too! Thanks for all of your support 🙂 xx
August 2, 2010 at 3:05 pm
And I thank you for your support my spunky girlfriend…you are so so talented!! Hope you have a great week ahead. Mwah xxx
August 1, 2010 at 7:31 am
wow wow wow… with his soul’s pen!! Lovely words, those…
A very romantic and soulful poem, Amanda…
It spoke of longing and hope… ME LOVES!!!
Hope you have a fantabulous Sunday!!! 😀
(mwwwaaaahhhhhzzzz)
August 1, 2010 at 8:40 am
It’s a glorious day and I amgoing to enjoy every bit of sunshine it offers. Maybe get more inspiration…so my soul’s pen get filled lol!!! Lovies you lots and lots…enjoy your Saturday night:) 🙂 🙂 xxxxxxxxxxx
August 1, 2010 at 7:32 am
the image is TOTALLY WOW girl…. the fire in the eyes is just toooo convincing… every word written in the poem is descriptive of the look in those eyes…. BRILLIANT!!!!
August 1, 2010 at 8:42 am
I love this image too…was not sure at first because of the tears…the poem was not meant to be sad…more one of hope!! But it warms my heart to know it had the right effect!!! Yahhhhhh….A million smiles and hugs just for you!!!!! xxxx
August 1, 2010 at 8:10 am
Just like the others, I was wowed by the fire in the eyes – gorgeous illustration
I love the words: he’ll write a song with the rays of the sun – that’s nice – really nice
August 1, 2010 at 8:22 am
Beautiful! It touches the hopeless romantic in me!
August 1, 2010 at 8:45 am
That makes 2 of us….let’s hope that never ever change!! I always say there is a little girl in me that will never totally grow up…and I am ok with that:) 🙂 🙂 Hugs and kisses oxox
August 1, 2010 at 8:30 am
divine…. nice…
To me
with his soul’s pen…..
open …….
I am here now..
love all…..
August 1, 2010 at 8:46 am
Aww…such a lovely comment and I really appreciate you being here. Hope you have a wonderful weekend wherever you are ~ Hugs x
August 1, 2010 at 9:26 am
As always, very sweet and soulful. Hope your weekend is treating you right. Regards…
August 2, 2010 at 2:52 pm
Jhannet, I am so far behind in replying to all the messages..so here I am am, thanks so much my dear friend~ Hope you had a fab weekend xx
August 1, 2010 at 10:21 am
I like the optimism. This kind of spirit keeps relationships going especially through the rough and stormy times. More sunshine in your world.
Stay well dear one.
Cheers!
August 2, 2010 at 2:53 pm
My dear Em, the weekend was such a good and sunny one, I am so late replying to these messages but know that I always appreciate each and every one from you!! Have a good week my friend x
August 1, 2010 at 12:29 pm
Oh, so beautiful. I love the imagery of his soul’s pen. You have a very special way with words.
X Lisa
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August 2, 2010 at 2:54 pm
Lisa, you make my day….thanks so very much for the award, I truly appreciate it and am so sorry for only replying now! You are a special lady and I am happy to call you friend. Have a good week my friend xx
August 1, 2010 at 12:50 pm
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August 2, 2010 at 2:55 pm
Oh my, I am so very late in replying and am so sorry!! Thanks so very much my friend, I truly appreciate it so very much!! I am honored and proud to be your friend. Love always xxxx
August 1, 2010 at 1:44 pm
Red, one thing I am sure of, he will, every day, with his soul’s pen, write the words of his heart for you…how could he not? This is wonderful poem, I love it…it gives me a happy feeling inside.
With love,
Cowboy
August 2, 2010 at 2:56 pm
Sorry for replying so late, I appreciate your comment Tracy!! Happy you liked the poem. ~ Hugs x
August 1, 2010 at 1:53 pm
it’s lovely 🙂
August 2, 2010 at 2:57 pm
Thanks my friend and I hope your week will be a happy one too:) Always lots of love from me to you 🙂 xxx
August 1, 2010 at 1:54 pm
Sweet and romantic.. i love this, Amanda!
August 2, 2010 at 2:58 pm
Imagina, so late in replying to messages but know that your comments always makes me happy!! Have a wonderful week my dear friend xxxxx
August 1, 2010 at 3:16 pm
Love it Girlfriend….Beautiful and romantic…written with your souls pen! xx Great graphics…
August 2, 2010 at 2:59 pm
Yvette, so late in replying but know that I always smile when you’re here. Lots of love and a happy new week my friend xxx
August 1, 2010 at 6:00 pm
Good writing, the song is a real blast from the past 🙂
August 2, 2010 at 3:00 pm
Cin, I’m only replying now and I see you’ve commented on the new postings already!! Sorry, just been a hectic weekend. Thanks my friend and hope you have a good week!! Hugs xx
August 1, 2010 at 9:18 pm
Amanda.. I love this one..!! It is just too beautiful and romantic..!! 🙂
August 2, 2010 at 3:01 pm
I love romantic too y friend. Hope you have a good new week!! Sending you much love and hugs xxxx
August 1, 2010 at 11:34 pm
sunshine poem,
the eye says a lot…
very intense poem,
beautiful and sweet..
😉
Happy Sunday!
August 2, 2010 at 3:03 pm
Thanks Ji, I am late in replying, has been a wonderful sunny and busy weekend. I always appreciate your visits dear friend. Thanks so much and I hope you have a great week ahead. Much love xxx
August 2, 2010 at 1:19 am
Oh to find a man who’ll write with his soul’s pen… 🙂 Beautiful poem Amanda!
August 2, 2010 at 3:04 pm
Thanks Lua….your comment made me smile!! Have a great week my dear friend. Sending you lots of love xx
August 2, 2010 at 6:33 am
Amanda, I know he’s writing each day . . . how could he not . . . and you wouldn’t feel it if it weren’t so. Wonderfully romantic poem and remarkable graphic. Yours are always so original, as are your poems. Thanks for another heart warming post.
August 2, 2010 at 3:10 pm
Jamie, your visits means so so much to me….my heart warms, I smile and look forward to your comments so very much!! Thank you my dear friend…you always have the kindest words ever and I am so thankful to call you my friend xxxx
August 2, 2010 at 7:28 am
“He’ll write a song to my heart/with the rays of the sun” you’ve captured the fire that exists in love. A poet writing about an inspired musician. Really beautiful Amanda.
August 2, 2010 at 3:20 pm
Aww…that’s so very heartwarming to have you here and I appreciate your comment so very much. Thanks so very much ~ Amanda xx
August 2, 2010 at 8:29 am
This poem keeps opening. Thanks. – Bill
August 2, 2010 at 3:25 pm
Thanks Bill…I have not had enough time lately to do all of my visits but will be around your nook soon…hope you have a blessed week my dear friend ~ Hugs xx