ELLIPSE
Mimic thoughts
through my fingers
on paper
received by my soul
thoughts in ellipse
driven by how
you read my words
once inert
dormant
then direction
thoughts of you
and my words
suddenly
get wings
©AmandavdL 2010
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SEAT OF MY SOUL 
August 8, 2010 at 8:24 am
Magical words, Amanda, ethereal, delicate poetry. Listening to the music at this moment. Thank you for this creation by Amanda.
August 9, 2010 at 7:42 am
Thanks Carol, so sorry for not visiting often lately, just so much going on but will be back to normal soon. Sending you love across the ocean!! Hygs
August 8, 2010 at 8:41 am
Well done, Ms. Romance 🙂 This one speaks to this poet’s feelings and thoughts when writing poems of love…trying to get the words to settle and flow onto the paper so that my Love reads them as I wish her to. Well written, Red (aka) Ms. Romance. I love it.
Cowboy
August 9, 2010 at 7:42 am
Thanks Mr Harris, you’re not bad in the Romance department either….phewww!! :):):)
August 8, 2010 at 8:47 am
Oooh, this is good. From the beginning image of mimicking thoughts, to thoughts in ellipse and knowing the reader’s interpretation is what unlocks them or hides their intended meaning with words – you caught that feeling so well; the feeling of a lover, hoping to say it right; hoping the love that will open their eyes is there. Nice work!
August 9, 2010 at 7:44 am
Thanks Cindy…so appreciate you being here and sorry for not being around so often…just very busy but back to normal soon:) Hugs x
August 8, 2010 at 11:42 am
This one didn’t need too much and you recognised that ans acted on it.
Great job
August 9, 2010 at 7:44 am
Thanks my friend xxx Hope your weekend was a good one! x
August 8, 2010 at 11:45 am
yes, with your word, we grow wings…
well penned and very powerful!
🙂
August 9, 2010 at 7:44 am
Thanks Ji…hope your weekend was a good one x
August 8, 2010 at 12:09 pm
I thank the words for flying my way! This is just lovely. So nicely said. Love the image of the wings. And I love the Shania song…she is so good. Thanks for sharing! Hope Your weekend is going great, Amanda! 🙂 🙂 🙂 xxxxxHeartspell
August 9, 2010 at 7:46 am
Thanks my friend, sorry for being absent lately…will be back to normal soon, just so much happening and not enough hours in a day. Hope your week will be a good one. Love you girlfriend xx
August 8, 2010 at 1:18 pm
The feeling of release and freedom flow with your words…beautifully penned! As always your labors of love touch us!
August 9, 2010 at 7:48 am
Thanks Cindy, will be over a bit later to visit…see you have a new post up…much love!! x
August 8, 2010 at 2:06 pm
how do u write it? :O
nice one
August 9, 2010 at 7:48 am
Wink…thanks friend xx
August 8, 2010 at 4:08 pm
Jou woorde is jam vir my siel 🙂
August 9, 2010 at 7:49 am
Dankie maatjie, ek laaikkkk 🙂
August 8, 2010 at 5:17 pm
To become a perfect circle is to become infinite
To draw your ellipse is to become undone
Each vision is unguided and becomes reality
Every dance becomes your story
All dreams ellispe your circle
Unforeseen and willful
We humble…
August 9, 2010 at 7:52 am
Wow, what a surprise to see you here my friend…I have missed you but see you’re back again :):) So beautifully said above…I send you love…and keep smiling:):)
August 8, 2010 at 7:20 pm
This was MUSICAL !!! Really!!! I could see notes flying between lines there…
The end was like a blissful union indeed… so romantic! Just what I wanted…a soft read!
You are magical, Amanda! You are getting to know me better and better by the minute!! Phheeww 😀
Luv ya!! And have a BEAUTIFUL Sunday Evening! MWAHH
August 9, 2010 at 7:53 am
Thanks Kav…very glad you liked it…wish it could be Sunday over again but reality calls…wishing you a wonderful week ahead and keep writing my dear!!! (Sooooooo far behind!!!) Mwah x
August 8, 2010 at 11:08 pm
Words really are the way we offer ourselves and are received, aren’t they. Thoughtful reflection. Thanks. – Bill
August 9, 2010 at 7:54 am
Thanks Bill…as always…I smile when you visit. Sending you hugs xxx
August 9, 2010 at 12:16 am
wow this one has a surreal magical feel to it…wow…
August 9, 2010 at 7:56 am
Thanks my friend…hope you had a good weekend and I appreciate your visits as always xx
August 9, 2010 at 1:48 am
I found this poem of your rather relaxing to read.. the words flow effortlessly.. Too beautiful!! 🙂
August 9, 2010 at 7:57 am
Mwah xx
August 9, 2010 at 5:33 am
You are the quintessential romantic, Amanda. Lovely. All your poems have wings. I hope that means your heart does too.
Thanks for another soul-touching verse and wonderful illustration and music. Nicely coordinated joy . . .
August 10, 2010 at 2:10 pm
Life is a delicacy of thoughts. 🙂 Nice one. 🙂
August 10, 2010 at 3:00 pm
i love the way this poem actually reads the way ellipses do ~ nice work.
thank you so much for the comment and the compliments. i wouldn’t say it’s so much talent as it is the images i experience. thank you, nonetheless : )
August 11, 2010 at 6:05 am
Awww…thanks Samantha, makes me happy to see you here, I value your support and comments immensely. Sending you love oxox
August 11, 2010 at 5:21 am
It peculiar how ordinary words seem to get wings when associated with someone in particular. Red seems more vibrant because that’s his favorite color. Steak is not so bad because that’s all he eats. The new artist is actually not so bad because he listens to so many tracks you can’t help but to sing along. Ok perhaps I’m projecting my own thoughts on your words but isn’t that an ellipse. A circular motion from me to you and now back towards you? Great Piece Amanda as always!!
August 11, 2010 at 6:26 am
(Red IS my favourtie color!!) I love your perspective on this….right back at you girlfriend xxx
August 11, 2010 at 11:34 am
And my words suddenly get wings. I love that, Amanda. Beautifully expressed there. The give and take of communicating in a nutshell! 🙂
August 13, 2010 at 7:53 am
Great flow and expression! So expressive yet simply stated – well done!
August 13, 2010 at 9:13 am
Thanks so much Ms Weger, I truly appreciate your invaluable comments and visit to my nook, it means so much to me x