TRANQUIL (Haiku)


 

 

Tranquil with myself

 I am now an idealist

 Entwine my fantasy

 

 

©AmandavdL 2010

 

 

 

 

 

 

72 Responses to “TRANQUIL (Haiku)”

  1. Hey Girlfriend, I just love your BLOG! You are a very talented woman you inspire me so much. What you have each day is amazing and I just love getting on hear not knowing what will be next luv ya girlfriend xxoo

  2. B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-T !!!!
    Those “alone” times are like treasures, you know! As long as we know how to handle them, they bring out the BEST and MOST CREATIVE SIDE in us!

    I LOVED THIS, Amanda.. It spoke to me! I feel this all the time!!!
    Phhheewww… I really have no words to describe how much I can relate to this Haiku.. it’s just plain wonderful!!!
    And I totally get where it’s coming from, my fav. girl… After a packed Monday, I am sure that the calm of the Tuesday morning filled your mind with a sense of peace.. Am I wrong in my presumption ? 🙂

    LOVE YOU LOADS! Take care, and have many such lovely moments during the day as well.. MWAH!

    • You are spot on girlfriend, so very peaceful and a bright sunny day ahead!! I always like warmer weather so much more and feel alive!!! Happy writing my fav girl too, I always look so forward with what you come up with next!! Enjoy your evening and loads of love dear one oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

  3. Hmm. I just adore when words are simple, but still etch out very clear sensations. Wonderful!

  4. Carol Ann Hoel Says:

    Such mystique! Ahhhh… The song fits very well. The photo is WOW! You are an artist of a special kind. Thank you for putting together this one for us.

  5. lifeinarecipe Says:

    Simple words that beg deep thought.
    I like! 😉

    • Whoohoo…at last I am replying to messages….will pop over to see you soon dear friend. Smiles all round right back at you….have a super dooper week!!!! With lots of nice thigs to eat and share with us:):): Hugsx

  6. Hi Amanda,
    WOW! I love it here, this is gorgeous. I’m so glad we met and I can’t wait to read more posts, lovely.
    I love your Haiku. I can tell this space will be the place for me when I need inspiration. Great to meet you!
    ~xo

  7. So said so much with this.
    Fantastic

  8. blissbait Says:

    That is simply crazy beautiful. Your haiku. It’s great. And I love the picture You paired it with. Is that Your art? It’s so lovely. THank You and Cheers and Namaste. 🙂

  9. I’m not sure why, but when I read this, a wonderful laugh wanted to rise up and escaped. Perhaps it was the delight of the warrioress who realizes what she conquered. This haiku reeks of accomplishment, in both theme and delivery.

    Nice one, Amanda!

  10. I love this poem, Amanda. Smple and to the point – beautiful!

  11. perfect Haiku…

  12. Ah … that’s just perfect.

  13. Great haiku. I think I need to think about it more. 🙂

    Awards for you (scroll to the bottom of the post): http://lizbethsgarden.wordpress.com/2010/08/16/awards-from-jingle-2/

  14. Brilliant! both photo and poem.

    Peace within. That’s all we really need.

  15. Red, you’ve did it again…took it up another notch 🙂 Haiku is such a lovely form to write. In it’s simplicity it can be the most profound of poems when done well…yours is well done. I love the choice of song as well. Another fantastic post. I told ya….Poet 🙂

    Your biggest fan,
    Tracy

  16. Amanda, I have an award for you 🙂 Not my usual style, but one must deviate from the norm from time to time. You will find the award here
    http://wp.me/PsPty-nt

    …I hope.

  17. It is always amazing to read your blog…
    its so refreshing… everything.. your write ups… Image… songs you share… jus a complete package…

    keep rocking!!!
    viva la vida

  18. Silly me! I left award for you on a comment ON MY PAGE ! How stupid of me! 🙂
    Here: Friendship awards for you, my lovely lovely Amanda 🙂 YOU ROCK!!
    Now me off to snuggle in my bed 🙂

  19. Nice haiku. I love Sade!

  20. Beautiful Haiku!

    I’d cherish it if u can see this: http://ediomoudofia.blogspot.com/2010/07/kissed-by-angel.html

    Ediomo.

  21. you did it again amanda… this is a brilliant haiku!

  22. Excellent! You have such an ability to refine and choose the pefect words.

  23. This impresses me, Amanda. I find haiku very difficult to write effectively, which is exactly what you’ve done here. Very very nice! 😀

  24. Whenever I’m alone- just by myself in silence, I feel like I’m made of ideas and fantasies more than flesh and bones.
    This was amazing Amanda, thank you for sharing! 🙂

  25. perfect beauty.

  26. simply… beautiful!

  27. The simplicity of the words play wonderfully against the complexity of the subject matter. Beautiful haiku, thanks for posting it on Poetry Potluck.

    crb.

  28. Great! I just love the simplicity of a haiku and am amazed at the depth of meaning in such a short piece.

    Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/08/09/the-storm/

  29. awesome piece…

  30. Luke Prater Says:

    Tranquil with myself… I wish i was…

    lovely

    Warmest Salad

    Luke xx

    http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/10/04/world-makes-the-music-go-round/

  31. The haiku is such a delicate form, and you have done it well, from my perspective, as a non-haikuist– I’ve never dared. The illustration is phenomenal!

  32. Dear Buttercup…

    My favorite form of poetry is Haiku and this one is so powerful and emotions are so strong in this.. I could picturise this immediately… thanks for sharing…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

    • I have not been doing Haiku that long but as with everything, the more you practice the better is is. Thanks so much for your kind comments. Have a great day my friend xx

  33. lovely haiku and a brilliant pic to go with it 🙂

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