MONOLOGUE
Slashed heart
bleeding soul
burning desire
in every dream
hesitation…
subconscious
in monologue
echoes though
my ventricles
gap in time
not a sound
tears floating
in mid-air
until the next
breath of air
©AmandavdL 2010
Slashed heart
bleeding soul
burning desire
in every dream
hesitation…
subconscious
in monologue
echoes though
my ventricles
gap in time
not a sound
tears floating
in mid-air
until the next
breath of air
©AmandavdL 2010
August 22, 2010 at 8:07 am
Another heart breaker. You present it so well. I really enjoy seeing each of your new creations so full of beauty and spellbinding words with lyrical art to cap it all off. Thank you for sharing, Amanda.
August 22, 2010 at 9:00 am
Smiling…yep…another heart breaker….LOL…Thanks Carol, I hope you have a superb weekend my friendxxx
August 22, 2010 at 9:06 am
Wow – superb image again that you’ve used Mandy. You are SOoooo creative! Love the words of your poem too – despite it being a heart-breaker! haha 😀 xx
August 22, 2010 at 9:18 am
The lines “in monologue / echoes though / my ventricles” are amazing!! You have written another excellent poem.
Best,
MS
August 23, 2010 at 1:37 pm
Thanks my friend, really appreciate you being here xx
August 22, 2010 at 9:27 am
This was poignant and lovely. For you my friend http://randomthoughtsandmusings.wordpress.com/2010/08/21/thank-you-but-i-have-nothing-to-say/
August 23, 2010 at 1:38 pm
Thanks so much Jhannet…sending you hugs xx
August 22, 2010 at 10:49 am
Wow, where do you get these images.
They are incredible.
The poem fits perfectly.
It always does
August 23, 2010 at 1:38 pm
It takes longer to find the right image and video than to do the poems lol….thanks for your comment xx
August 22, 2010 at 12:19 pm
breathe taking image and wording…
u r highly talented.
😉
August 23, 2010 at 1:39 pm
Thanks Ji…hope your weekend was a good one 🙂 x
August 22, 2010 at 1:00 pm
Exquisite, Amanda, in the purest sense of the word. Your monologue is spot on. 🙂
August 23, 2010 at 1:40 pm
Glad you loved the monologue Tracy…thanks for your wonderful comments as always ~ Hugs x
August 22, 2010 at 1:51 pm
So wretchedly sad, takes my breath away…
August 23, 2010 at 1:40 pm
Fiction baby 🙂 x
August 22, 2010 at 2:13 pm
Intense. The poem pulses with energy. thanks for this. – Bill
August 23, 2010 at 1:41 pm
Thanks Bill…hope your weekend was a good one:) x
August 22, 2010 at 3:09 pm
It amazes me how you put words together so artfully:
subconscious
in monologue
echoes though
my ventricles
I like REM. Everybody hurts, how true.
Hugs, dear Amanda!
August 23, 2010 at 1:42 pm
That song of REM is one of my favourties…thanks so much for your comment and hope you had a brilliant weekend my friend xx
August 22, 2010 at 3:27 pm
That’s really a monologue. Echoing all the time in subconscious…The pic look like ‘poison ivy’ from Batman.
August 23, 2010 at 1:42 pm
It does look like poison ivy….did not think about it!! Clever you!!! Thanks for being here my friend, I so appreciate it 🙂
August 22, 2010 at 3:37 pm
I can feel the pain in these words…a moving moment…great graphics..x
August 23, 2010 at 1:43 pm
This time…fiction…wink 🙂 xxx
August 22, 2010 at 5:04 pm
Oh how sad… Beautifully written Amanda- it broke my heart…
August 23, 2010 at 1:43 pm
Sorry to make you sad my friend….:):):) xx
August 22, 2010 at 11:14 pm
Well done and thanks for sticking with my blog during my absence.
August 23, 2010 at 1:53 pm
You are very welcome, I love your work so much!! Thanks for being here too:):)
August 23, 2010 at 12:25 am
i liked this one
August 23, 2010 at 1:54 pm
Thanks Amy, always so lovely to see you here:):)
August 23, 2010 at 1:01 am
Beautiful and amazing=) Love all the images portrayed within this poem^^ Thank for sharing=D
August 23, 2010 at 1:54 pm
Thanks my friend…happy you liked xxx
August 23, 2010 at 1:54 am
wow!! lovely =)
August 23, 2010 at 1:55 pm
Mwah mwah xx
August 23, 2010 at 2:15 am
Amazing Amanda..!! I’ve been thru the exact same feelings.. you’ve captured it perfectly..!!! Miss reading your works like before, but I’ll definitely try catch up as often as I can 🙂 much Love Amanda.. !!
August 23, 2010 at 1:55 pm
I miss you my friend, very much so….sending you love and thanks for making the time xxxxx Hugs xxx
August 23, 2010 at 6:44 am
a heart breaker but full of love and tenderness…
love your posts… the images and pieces are always so refreshing and new….
keep rocking amanda….
viva la vida
August 23, 2010 at 1:56 pm
Viva la vida baby….and thanks so much xx
August 24, 2010 at 12:12 am
wow for both- the pic and the poem.
August 24, 2010 at 1:43 pm
Thanks my friend…Hugs x
August 24, 2010 at 6:15 am
This was one perfect poem!!
“subconscious
in monologue” — loved these words… sometimes, we don’t even realize what we are thinking of… the thoughts just creep in and out…and later, we feel like something just happened! It takes us a while to grasp the moment, the feeling in it and to make something out of it… And I think this poem expressed that feeling very very veeeeeeeerrryyy well!!!
This was a superb piece, my friend…. AND SORRY FOR THE DELAY IN COMMENT 😦
Weekend weekend …. phhheeww… have a HUGE backlog now…
Hope you are having a fabulous Tuesday morning! 😀
LOTSAAAAA LOVE flying your way… xoxoxoxo
August 24, 2010 at 1:47 pm
Thanks Kavita, they sure just creep in and out!! It’s ok…you have to relax too you know. We all do…hope it was a good one!!! And ditto right back at you. Mwah xxx Have a good week ~ Hugs x
August 25, 2010 at 6:55 am
Love the “echos through my ventricles” – very original. The waves that gurgle up on us … well done! x
August 26, 2010 at 8:15 am
I so smile when you come to visit….your face everywhere…that makes me very happy…you’re a special lady..love xxx
August 25, 2010 at 7:02 am
very powerful and full of intense energy. loved it! great pic too! thanks!
August 26, 2010 at 8:16 am
Happy you liked it my friend…always happy to see your icon here. Hugs just for you xxx