TWILIGHT
Entangled heart
scattered thoughts
cluster of ruminate
I hear your voice
cold and dissociate
twilight days
twilight nights
ice tears on my cheek
my broken heart
remembers
notre amour était une fois
c’est fini pour toujours
©AvdL 2010
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SEAT OF MY SOUL 
August 29, 2010 at 6:58 am
Enchanting and appropriate as my heart recovers from saying goodbye to a dear friend who I may not see again. Thank you.
August 29, 2010 at 9:00 am
Powerful words make for powerful emotions. A wonderful piece indeed. Bravo!
P.S.- that photo is so striking and compliments the poem very nicely 🙂
August 29, 2010 at 9:52 am
well spoken words of a broken, still entangled heart, complemented as usual by the perfect image. Hugs!
August 30, 2010 at 9:26 am
🙂 🙂 Thanks my friend…hope you had a great weekend 🙂 🙂
August 29, 2010 at 10:13 am
ok, first: that pic is FREAKING awesome! ok… moving on. loved the poem, definietely but what does the last two lines mean? lol 🙂
August 30, 2010 at 9:46 am
It means a love lost forever :):):) Thanks for being here my dear friend….love it so 🙂 x
August 29, 2010 at 11:30 am
Sadness surrounds your words and presentation of this artwork. You know how to project emotion. Thank you for sharing.
August 30, 2010 at 9:48 am
Thanks Carol, I hope you had a wonderful weekend xxx
August 29, 2010 at 11:49 am
Engaging and evocative … and sometimes it is over forever … broken hearts don’t forget, and they shouldn’t.
August 30, 2010 at 9:49 am
Nope, you have said it so very well Jamie, broken hearts never forget. I love it when you visit…so many at once…whoohooo!!! Hope you have a super week ahead!! xxxx Hugs to you x
August 29, 2010 at 1:36 pm
Once again, from your fingertips to my heart.
So sad.
August 30, 2010 at 9:54 am
Great minds think alike my friend xxx
August 29, 2010 at 5:32 pm
This was so sad and touching Amanda, absolutely beautiful! I love that song…
August 30, 2010 at 9:54 am
Thanks Lue, so happy you liked it. Sending you hugs and hope you have a brilliant week ahead!! xxxx
August 29, 2010 at 5:54 pm
It’s amazing how much emotion and passion can be expressed in 36 little words…what a testament to your heart and poetic skills, Amanda. Well done!
Image, poem, and song are a trifecta. 🙂
August 30, 2010 at 9:55 am
Thanks Tracy…I like trifecta’s….wink 🙂 🙂 Hugs x
August 29, 2010 at 9:04 pm
Wow, amazing. I really liked this one, and the last two lines in French really added to it. Great poem Amanda!
August 30, 2010 at 9:59 am
A bit of a twist with the French…but I like twists :):) So happy you liked it. Have a great week ahead my friend xx
August 29, 2010 at 9:22 pm
Amanda..I swear I miss reading your works like I used too..!! And this poem is too amazing.. I had to get help with the last lines (don’t know a word in french ) The last two lines say so much, I guess, even if you had written only those two lines, It’d have created the same impact.. Powerful..!
August 30, 2010 at 10:00 am
I am so happy to see you here coz I really really miss you a lot. Thanks my friend and hope you have a wonderful week 🙂 Come back soon 🙂 🙂 xxx
August 30, 2010 at 12:11 am
excellent job,
sorry for coming in late,
Got tired yesterday….
I love your image as always.
August 30, 2010 at 10:01 am
That’s ok Jingle, you have to have time off too and rest…that is exactly what I did yesterday…a lot to do today but we know how to do it, don’t we? Wishing you the best week ahead sweetheart xxx
August 30, 2010 at 12:53 am
haunting… heartbreaking… simply beautiful! well done again, amanda!
if you have time, i have friendship awards for you at:
http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2010/08/august-awards-from-jingle.html
blessings,
bing
August 30, 2010 at 10:02 am
Wowowowowow…how wonderful are you!! I soooo appreciate it and coming from you means sooo much to me. I will place it in Jingle’s awards page. Thanks again my dear friend, you have made me smile on this Monday morning. Have a fabulous week ahead. Hugs xxxxx
August 30, 2010 at 1:18 am
Wow! Amazing words yet again and that picture has me just captivated as well.
August 30, 2010 at 10:52 am
🙂 You make me so happy…thanks my friend xx xx
August 30, 2010 at 3:09 am
For all your encouragement I have an award for you. http://frayedges.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/butterfly-award/
Pass this on to 1 to 10 friends.
August 30, 2010 at 10:54 am
You are such a darling, I thank you so very much and will place it in Jingles awards page…I am honored to be your friend….thanks again dear Lisa xxxx
August 30, 2010 at 3:44 am
Moving poem…
I also have a special recognition for you.
I also wanted to let you know of some recognitions I gave you. See:
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/some-special-poets-i-admire/
Have a great Sunday!
JP
August 30, 2010 at 11:03 am
I am smiling from ear to ear, you are such a wonderful friend and I value you very much….this means a lot to me. Thank you JP…I am honored to receive this from you xxx Hugs xxx
August 30, 2010 at 9:36 am
I agree with tasithoughts. Very moving. And those recognitions are well deserved. 🙂
August 30, 2010 at 11:04 am
Thans so much my friend, lovely to have you here…I will be over to visit you shortly too…Monday and a lot to catch up on but so much fun!!! Have a great week my friend xx
August 30, 2010 at 10:23 am
*Entangled heart
scattered thoughts*
And again another beautiful post !
August 30, 2010 at 11:16 am
Thans so much my friend…you always say nice things and I really appreciate it so much xxx Hope you have a wonderful weekend xxx Hugs x
August 30, 2010 at 11:19 am
There was a coldness to this poem, but it worked. I liked the line “cluster of ruminate.”
By the way, I was reading your answers … loved the dog!
August 31, 2010 at 5:24 am
Thanks Jhannet…Coco is the “love of my life”…Hugs to you dear friend xx
August 30, 2010 at 12:00 pm
Amazing song to go with a fantastic poem 🙂
August 31, 2010 at 5:40 am
I love that song too…very much xxx Have a great day my friend x
August 30, 2010 at 12:46 pm
And why is French so much sadder, in a beautiful way, than any other language? There is an entrenched sorrow here, beautifully written!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
August 31, 2010 at 5:44 am
I love French…and one day I’ll master it!! 🙂
August 30, 2010 at 1:02 pm
‘toujours’ is a long long time, Amanda…
But yea, sometimes, when tears turn to ice, one just knows!!!
Lovely, melancholic poem, girl…
But please do know that notre amitié will last for a looooooooooong time 🙂
Lovies to you, my dear friend… mwahz!
August 31, 2010 at 5:45 am
You see, you just taught me something!!! Nothing rusted with your French dear one!! Hope you have caught up with all you had to do :…have a great week my darling. Mwahhhhxxx
August 31, 2010 at 12:19 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/30/thursday-poets-rally-week-27-awards/
Happy Monday,
5 awards 4 u, enjoy!
the first 3 awards are not to be passed on,
August 31, 2010 at 6:01 am
Thanks so much Jingle…your encouragement means a lot to me. You know I will cherish these so very much. xxx
August 31, 2010 at 1:26 am
I almost didn’t read this one because of the title.
(Noooo! Not another “Twilight” poem about love and vampires!)
But I gave you more credit than that – and I was correct in doing so. Nice work, Buttercup!
(And thank goodness you didn’t mention vampires!)
August 31, 2010 at 6:02 am
Eric, I am so over the Twilight thing also (to be honest, I never was into it at all!!) Thanks so much, what a lovely comment!! Have a great week my friend xx
August 31, 2010 at 4:36 am
Thank you for bringing me back to this song.
Namaste,
Surface Earth
August 31, 2010 at 6:05 am
Thanks so much for your comment and being here, I really appreciate it so very much and will return the compliment. Namaste xx
September 23, 2010 at 1:42 pm
fabulous. beautiful and exact.
September 23, 2010 at 6:47 pm
Now how can I not be over the moon with a comment like that!!!??? I love you girlfriend…..thanks so much!! Mwah xx