FIELD OF VISION
Field of vision
vessels afar
a light mist
sprout in the air
salted sea breeze
fog on my face
cuckoo dances
in zephyr’s mirth
to hold you close
in the morning dew
my love for you
a glee of delight
©AvdL 2010
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SEAT OF MY SOUL 
September 3, 2010 at 8:21 am
Such beautiful words to go with a lovely photograph….a poem with much warmth.
September 3, 2010 at 12:31 pm
Much appreciated…I am so happy to have you here 🙂
September 3, 2010 at 8:33 am
Vivid 🙂
love your words.
loads of love.
XoXo
September 3, 2010 at 12:32 pm
And she came more than once and bring sunshine into my life…thanks Ankita, much aprreciated xx Loads of love right back at you xx
September 3, 2010 at 8:39 am
Wonderful! I love the rhythm and light hearted feel of it! ;-}
September 3, 2010 at 12:33 pm
And I get showered with more of my darling friend. Thanks Cindy…hope you will have a wonderful weekend, it’s Friday here already!! Hugs x
September 3, 2010 at 10:18 am
That is a stunning image to go with your fine poem today, Amanda. It’s clear to me that you love to play with words. Bravo!
September 3, 2010 at 12:35 pm
Thanks Tony, when I see your little Trotterville icon, I smile….and think of sunshine. You truly are a blessing. Much love x
September 3, 2010 at 10:42 am
Beautiful, as always. Lovely picture too. I’m off to check out that strawberry and ricotta tart I noticed below. Now that Spring is here in Aus, I think it will be just what I need. Yum.
September 3, 2010 at 12:36 pm
Thanks Lisa, are you feeling spring in the air down in Melbourne yet? Will be over to visit you soon my friend. Thanks so much for your comment and have a wonderful weekend. Hugs x
September 3, 2010 at 11:26 am
a glee of light,
that’s bright…
🙂
September 3, 2010 at 12:39 pm
We like bright, don’t we 🙂 🙂 🙂 Smiles coming your way xxx
September 3, 2010 at 12:10 pm
Wonderfully written work! And love the Van Morrison song! =)
-Weasel
September 3, 2010 at 12:43 pm
I have every single CD of Van…love love love his music. Thanks Weasel, wonderful to have you visit. Much love x
September 3, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Loving your words, Amanda – there is joy here and laughter – and the image is stunning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend!
September 4, 2010 at 9:35 am
Ditto my friend and thanks as always for your most kind thoughts. Much love xx
September 3, 2010 at 1:35 pm
😀 Beautifully written, thank for sharing Amanda<3
September 4, 2010 at 9:36 am
Thanks for being here Riika xxx Have a great weekend xx
September 3, 2010 at 2:26 pm
wonderful love poem. Reads off smoothly with great imagery.
September 4, 2010 at 9:37 am
Thanks so much for your always kind comments my friend, hope you have a joyful weekend xx
September 3, 2010 at 3:29 pm
I really love this poem, Amanda, you never fail to impress me!
September 4, 2010 at 9:38 am
Smiling from ear to ear…Mwah x
September 3, 2010 at 3:32 pm
That’s some powerful love….
Love to you from the moon
September 4, 2010 at 9:39 am
I am blessed to have you here Moon. Much love x
September 3, 2010 at 4:22 pm
This is so happy and light-hearted Amanda. It suite you and also the time of year!
September 4, 2010 at 9:39 am
Thanks Adee…have a great weekend my friend x
September 3, 2010 at 4:36 pm
….this is so uplifting Amanda….great words…..take care you hear….and a great weekend……..huggs…..
September 4, 2010 at 9:40 am
You too my friend, sorry not been around so much…a bit crazy but finding my feet again. Much love to you xxx
September 3, 2010 at 5:39 pm
lovely words
lovely poem
lovely rhymeeee
September 4, 2010 at 9:40 am
And smiles all round….Hugs x
September 3, 2010 at 6:29 pm
Facets upon facets make for a brilliant gem…This one is a Ruby. 😉
September 3, 2010 at 6:38 pm
Thanks Cowboy…indeed a Ruby to my heart:)…. Many hugs to you x
September 3, 2010 at 6:57 pm
Yaaayyy…mine too!! And we are BACK to love! 🙂
Every word of this poem, I FELT and LIVED!!! But then you know that already ofcourse!
I am sure you know it! 🙂
I hope this is the state of your mind too…
It’s a beautiful poem… lovely lovely lovely!!! I bow to you, Amanda.. you have totally nailed it!
Love and hugs across continents to my sweet friend! 😀 xoxoxoxox
September 4, 2010 at 9:42 am
Hope you have a wonderful joyfull weekend too my NY girlfriend…Love is all we EVER need!! Enjoy each other always. Mwahhhhh from me to you both xx
September 3, 2010 at 7:14 pm
sweet 🙂
September 4, 2010 at 9:42 am
Mwah xx and thanks xx
September 3, 2010 at 10:03 pm
Amanda, you are an expert in romantic poetry. Dazzling word pictures you paint with phrases that speak in deep tones of emotion. Thank you for sharing.
September 4, 2010 at 9:43 am
🙂 🙂 🙂 Hugs to you dear Carol xx
September 3, 2010 at 11:00 pm
Beautiful words Amanda, really enjoyed reading this one. Love the photograph you chose for it, very aptly done. 🙂
September 4, 2010 at 9:44 am
I am always smiling when you approve….thanks my friend and have a joyfull weekend xx
September 3, 2010 at 11:04 pm
Mmm, nice and short but packing a punch!
September 4, 2010 at 9:44 am
Thanks gorgeous one…have a joyfull weekend xx
September 3, 2010 at 11:16 pm
I must admit that I am equally excited each day to see what music you post as I am to read your daily poem. Happy weekend to you!
September 4, 2010 at 9:45 am
Now that is nice to hear!!! Hope your weekend is a joyful one Suzi xxx
September 4, 2010 at 1:17 am
I especially love the giggle of the last line, that breaks the trance of words– a great write my friend. Have a fun week-end and cross your fingers for us that Hurricane Earle doesn’t veer into New England!
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September 4, 2010 at 9:47 am
I am thinking of you Marilynn and please be safe. Thanks for your comment!! Much love x
September 4, 2010 at 7:07 am
A lovely poem Amanda – light and breezy and packed with love. Your choice of words is perfect – as always!
Chloe xx 😀
September 4, 2010 at 9:50 am
Love your comment sweet one…thanks and much love xx
September 4, 2010 at 2:41 pm
A pefect moment encapsuled in a perfect poem. Nice photo and vid to go with. Love Van Morrison and this in particular.
Thanks for another really lovely post …
xox
September 5, 2010 at 11:32 am
I think I have every single CD of Van…love it xx
September 4, 2010 at 2:53 pm
stunning and sophisticated like a pure crystal glass – both photo and words – I loved this Amanda!!