Field of vision

vessels afar

a light mist

sprout in the air

salted sea breeze

fog on my face

cuckoo dances

in zephyr’s mirth

to hold you close

in the morning dew

my love for you

a glee of delight


©AvdL 2010



51 Responses to “FIELD OF VISION”

  1. Such beautiful words to go with a lovely photograph….a poem with much warmth.

  2. Vivid 🙂
    love your words.
    loads of love.

  3. lifeinarecipe Says:

    Wonderful! I love the rhythm and light hearted feel of it! ;-}

  4. That is a stunning image to go with your fine poem today, Amanda. It’s clear to me that you love to play with words. Bravo!

  5. Beautiful, as always. Lovely picture too. I’m off to check out that strawberry and ricotta tart I noticed below. Now that Spring is here in Aus, I think it will be just what I need. Yum.

    • Thanks Lisa, are you feeling spring in the air down in Melbourne yet? Will be over to visit you soon my friend. Thanks so much for your comment and have a wonderful weekend. Hugs x

  6. a glee of light,
    that’s bright…


  7. systematicweasel Says:

    Wonderfully written work! And love the Van Morrison song! =)


  8. Loving your words, Amanda – there is joy here and laughter – and the image is stunning. Hope you have a wonderful weekend!

  9. 😀 Beautifully written, thank for sharing Amanda<3

  10. wonderful love poem. Reads off smoothly with great imagery.

  11. I really love this poem, Amanda, you never fail to impress me!

  12. moondustwriter Says:

    That’s some powerful love….

    Love to you from the moon

  13. This is so happy and light-hearted Amanda. It suite you and also the time of year!

  14. ….this is so uplifting Amanda….great words…..take care you hear….and a great weekend……..huggs…..

  15. lovely words
    lovely poem
    lovely rhymeeee

  16. Facets upon facets make for a brilliant gem…This one is a Ruby. 😉

  17. Yaaayyy…mine too!! And we are BACK to love! 🙂
    Every word of this poem, I FELT and LIVED!!! But then you know that already ofcourse!
    I am sure you know it! 🙂

    I hope this is the state of your mind too…

    It’s a beautiful poem… lovely lovely lovely!!! I bow to you, Amanda.. you have totally nailed it!

    Love and hugs across continents to my sweet friend! 😀 xoxoxoxox

  18. Amanda, you are an expert in romantic poetry. Dazzling word pictures you paint with phrases that speak in deep tones of emotion. Thank you for sharing.

  19. Beautiful words Amanda, really enjoyed reading this one. Love the photograph you chose for it, very aptly done. 🙂

  20. Mmm, nice and short but packing a punch!

  21. I must admit that I am equally excited each day to see what music you post as I am to read your daily poem. Happy weekend to you!

  22. I especially love the giggle of the last line, that breaks the trance of words– a great write my friend. Have a fun week-end and cross your fingers for us that Hurricane Earle doesn’t veer into New England!

  23. A lovely poem Amanda – light and breezy and packed with love. Your choice of words is perfect – as always!

    Chloe xx 😀

  24. A pefect moment encapsuled in a perfect poem. Nice photo and vid to go with. Love Van Morrison and this in particular.

    Thanks for another really lovely post …


  25. stunning and sophisticated like a pure crystal glass – both photo and words – I loved this Amanda!!

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