Come Undone
Flashback from the past
Embrace fate’s requisition
New horizon waits
Gently whispered words
Of love slowly becoming
Pieces of my heart
©AvdL 2010
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SEAT OF MY SOUL 
October 3, 2010 at 3:12 pm
Oh yes! In a nutshell, Amanda. I’m so happy for you, my friend! xxx
October 3, 2010 at 3:41 pm
If you have a look at the top Adee, it’s fiction :)…..amazing what we create in our mind on a rainy Sunday afternoon!!! Much love xxx
October 3, 2010 at 3:14 pm
Another fine poem…oh by the way before I forget to tell you…I tried you Lamb Salad recipe…it was quite delicious…have a great weekend.
October 3, 2010 at 3:46 pm
Thanks Charlles…very pleased you liked the saled, it’s a rainy day here and I am going to put a roast pork shoulder in the oven (crackling)…with lots of veggies…. have been hanging out for good vegetables. Hope you and yours have a wonderful weekend too 🙂 {{{Hugsss}}} x
October 3, 2010 at 3:19 pm
New horizon? That sounds great, my friend!
xxx
October 3, 2010 at 3:49 pm
Did you see it was fiction darlin….amazing where your imaginaton takes you on a rainy Sunday Afternoon!!!!! btw..it’s almost 4pm here and I poured myself a Merlot about an hour ago 🙂 🙂 Hope you’re having a great weekend my dearest friend. (Am worried about my mail) still did not get anything and my eyes are blind from looking 😦 Love you loads xoxoxoxox
October 3, 2010 at 3:22 pm
Lovely Haiku, Amanda…you’re talent is becoming more and more refined with each poem you write. The entire post is another Trifecta. Red ROCKS 🙂
October 3, 2010 at 3:50 pm
I love it when you say RED ROCKS…thanks my dearest friend, your comment always means so much to me 🙂 xx Enjoy your Sunday 🙂 xx
October 3, 2010 at 4:09 pm
Careful what you write about, Amanda, it can come true, you know! 🙂 Lots of love to you.
October 3, 2010 at 4:19 pm
Funny you should say that, after I posted it, I thought exactly the same thing:) ….Lots of love right back to you too dearest Amy…it’s raining here today and a lazy Sunday afternoon…perfect for reading and catching up on amazing poetry and writings. Hope you have a good one too 🙂 🙂 xxx
October 3, 2010 at 10:24 pm
Lovely verse, my friend! The picture is kindof unsettling though… I m thinking of you today with your rain & the wafting smells of pork roast. Be well!
October 4, 2010 at 1:15 pm
Thanks Ms M…the sun want to show it’s beautiful face now and again today…thinking of you too and will be over to read your Potluck linking soon…very happy to see you there. Sending you hugs xxx
October 3, 2010 at 11:12 pm
Amanda, that is lovely … for a rainy day or not … the illustration is quite dramatic … Wonderful! and Duran Duran … makes for a happy Sunday visit … Monday there!
Enjoy your day and the rain …
Hugs! xx
October 4, 2010 at 1:17 pm
Rain washes away all the dirt and makes way for the new…had a wonderful day 🙂 Love seeing your gravitar here so many times…THAT makes MY day !! 🙂 🙂 🙂
October 4, 2010 at 1:35 am
From past to present to future and back again, suggesting where we have been and where we are going. Images, word and visual, with musical lyrics supporting, create an engaging presentation of metamorphosis in artful form by the talented Amanda. Thank you for sharing.
October 4, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Wow Carol, I can never comment so beautifully like you always do!!! Your words take my breath away…it is amazing, I so value you here my dear friend xxx
October 4, 2010 at 1:40 am
Lovely words, fiction or not. I especially loved the final stanza – words of love coming from heart, becoming heart…
October 4, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Thanks Ruth, your kindness always warms my heart and know that I appreciate it so much . Hugs xxx
October 4, 2010 at 2:07 am
thats beautifully written..
October 4, 2010 at 1:23 pm
Thanks so very much for being here, I really aprreciate your kind comment xx
October 4, 2010 at 2:35 am
That’s true isn’t it–words of love do become parts of our hearts! Very nice to see this sweet poem on a Sunday afternoon…
October 4, 2010 at 1:23 pm
Happy you enjoyed my dear friend…I always love to see you here 🙂 xx
October 4, 2010 at 6:38 am
love the image,
May sunshine of love fill you mind…
love your Haikus.
Cheers!
October 4, 2010 at 1:24 pm
Thanks Ji, hope you had a brilliant beautiful birthday 🙂 Cheers xx
October 4, 2010 at 8:17 am
It may be fiction, but it rings very true
October 4, 2010 at 1:24 pm
Thanks my dear friend, glad to see you here xxx
October 4, 2010 at 12:09 pm
wonderful flash!
October 4, 2010 at 1:27 pm
Thanks so much, delighted to see you here. Thanks for the comment and have a happy week x
October 4, 2010 at 1:11 pm
Ah, we’ve had rain all day, too and your poems mirror the mood so well.
Reflective, peaceful.
October 4, 2010 at 1:29 pm
Always delightful to see you here my friend… thanks for your lovely and kind comment and have a wonderful week ahead! Hugs xx
October 4, 2010 at 3:38 pm
I could watch the picture transform all day – hope your Monday has been awesome so far 🙂
October 5, 2010 at 12:05 pm
Already it’s Tuesday afternoon before I reply to your comment..wonderful to see you here my friend and I hope your day will be a bright smily one 🙂 xx
October 5, 2010 at 12:00 am
“Gently whispered words
Of love slowly becoming
Pieces of my heart”
What great lines!
October 5, 2010 at 12:10 pm
And I smile when I read your kind and encouraging comments…thanks so much. Hugs x
October 14, 2010 at 6:51 am
Hey Amanda – as you know, I’ve been out of action for a while…and just wanted to let you know how refreshing it was to come back to visit your blog. Amazing words, awesome imagery and such great music. Yours is a totally awesome blog! Love n hugs, Chloe 😀 xx
October 14, 2010 at 12:42 pm
So happy to see you’re back girlfriend…your green gravatar always makes me smile…been thinking about you …very very happy to see you *smile*…and I will wait in patience for whenever you’re ready to tell…sending you loads of love..Hugs xx
October 15, 2010 at 5:04 am
Hey there sweet lady ! 😀 I will send you a little email on Facebook!! Love you lots xx
October 15, 2010 at 2:56 pm
*Wink*…loviesssssszzzzzzzzzz oxoxoxo