Come Undone




Flashback from the past

Embrace fate’s requisition

New horizon waits


Gently whispered words

Of love slowly becoming

Pieces of my heart


©AvdL 2010


38 Responses to “Come Undone”

  1. Oh yes! In a nutshell, Amanda. I’m so happy for you, my friend! xxx

  2. Another fine poem…oh by the way before I forget to tell you…I tried you Lamb Salad recipe…it was quite delicious…have a great weekend.

    • Thanks Charlles…very pleased you liked the saled, it’s a rainy day here and I am going to put a roast pork shoulder in the oven (crackling)…with lots of veggies…. have been hanging out for good vegetables. Hope you and yours have a wonderful weekend too 🙂 {{{Hugsss}}} x

  3. New horizon? That sounds great, my friend!

    • Did you see it was fiction darlin….amazing where your imaginaton takes you on a rainy Sunday Afternoon!!!!!’s almost 4pm here and I poured myself a Merlot about an hour ago 🙂 🙂 Hope you’re having a great weekend my dearest friend. (Am worried about my mail) still did not get anything and my eyes are blind from looking 😦 Love you loads xoxoxoxox

  4. Lovely Haiku, Amanda…you’re talent is becoming more and more refined with each poem you write. The entire post is another Trifecta. Red ROCKS 🙂

  5. Careful what you write about, Amanda, it can come true, you know! 🙂 Lots of love to you.

    • Funny you should say that, after I posted it, I thought exactly the same thing:) ….Lots of love right back to you too dearest Amy…it’s raining here today and a lazy Sunday afternoon…perfect for reading and catching up on amazing poetry and writings. Hope you have a good one too 🙂 🙂 xxx

  6. Lovely verse, my friend! The picture is kindof unsettling though… I m thinking of you today with your rain & the wafting smells of pork roast. Be well!

    • Thanks Ms M…the sun want to show it’s beautiful face now and again today…thinking of you too and will be over to read your Potluck linking soon…very happy to see you there. Sending you hugs xxx

  7. Amanda, that is lovely … for a rainy day or not … the illustration is quite dramatic … Wonderful! and Duran Duran … makes for a happy Sunday visit … Monday there!

    Enjoy your day and the rain …

    Hugs! xx

    • Rain washes away all the dirt and makes way for the new…had a wonderful day 🙂 Love seeing your gravitar here so many times…THAT makes MY day !! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  8. From past to present to future and back again, suggesting where we have been and where we are going. Images, word and visual, with musical lyrics supporting, create an engaging presentation of metamorphosis in artful form by the talented Amanda. Thank you for sharing.

  9. Lovely words, fiction or not. I especially loved the final stanza – words of love coming from heart, becoming heart…

  10. thats beautifully written..

  11. That’s true isn’t it–words of love do become parts of our hearts! Very nice to see this sweet poem on a Sunday afternoon…

  12. love the image,
    May sunshine of love fill you mind…
    love your Haikus.

  13. It may be fiction, but it rings very true

  14. wonderful flash!

  15. Ah, we’ve had rain all day, too and your poems mirror the mood so well.
    Reflective, peaceful.

  16. I could watch the picture transform all day – hope your Monday has been awesome so far 🙂

  17. “Gently whispered words

    Of love slowly becoming

    Pieces of my heart”

    What great lines!

  18. Hey Amanda – as you know, I’ve been out of action for a while…and just wanted to let you know how refreshing it was to come back to visit your blog. Amazing words, awesome imagery and such great music. Yours is a totally awesome blog! Love n hugs, Chloe 😀 xx

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