MOMENTS
ardent moments
spheres of my soul
caught up in rhymes
just empty words
of hurt and sadness
desires and wishes
my breath a silent echo
as I write these words
of a love so fierce
for the one I love
you watch over me
see my aching heart
and caress it gently
as you see yourself
in the golden mirror
of my love
where I softly
whisper to your heart
©AvdL 2010
October 8, 2010 at 12:36 pm
wow! I just got all quiet and crouched down like I’m waiting to hear a whisper…wonderful writing. Dig the pic as well
October 8, 2010 at 3:04 pm
Thanks my dear friend, so happy to have you here, I really appreciate it!! xxx
October 8, 2010 at 12:43 pm
Such a gentle expression of quiet love… Wonderful, Buttercup.
October 8, 2010 at 3:05 pm
Thabnks so much for that kind comment, always love it when you visit my friend. Big hugs xxx
October 8, 2010 at 1:07 pm
Tender words of love. Beautifully illustrated, written, and sung. I love Celtic music. You put together the arts in a way that captivates. Thank you for sharing, Amanda. Blessings to you…
October 8, 2010 at 3:06 pm
I love all of Enya’s music so much…in a way it calms me down. Take care my beautiful friend xx
October 8, 2010 at 1:21 pm
This one feels so sad at the start but it has such a sweet ending!
October 8, 2010 at 3:07 pm
Thanks so much for your warm kind comment Ana…I value your presence here so very much xx Big hugs xx
October 8, 2010 at 1:33 pm
the poem is captive !
October 8, 2010 at 3:07 pm
So are you precious one xxxx
October 8, 2010 at 1:48 pm
Wonderfully expressed words of love, Amanda! But so sad, my friend… xxx
October 8, 2010 at 3:08 pm
I am good my friend, it always helps when we write and get it all out. I value your presence here so very much xxx Big hugs xxx
October 8, 2010 at 2:04 pm
Buttercup you have an eloquent sadness and beauty in your words I hope that you can find a laugh or two in this world. Have you ever pulled a practical Joke…Just wondering because I have (probably too much) but it truly makes me feel a little better especially when they are deserved. The one thing that I have found from all my rottenness is that at gatherings people usually laugh because of me…including my self. I have some of them posted on my blog and I’ll post more as I have time. The best ones are always the ones yet to come. Have a great day!
October 8, 2010 at 3:13 pm
Lol, I have an absolute love for life and laugh a lot…part of who I am …I think I’ve been Guinevere in my previous life because I always write about love and in a way with sadness. That does not mean I am sad…I think we all have moments of sadness but that does not make us sad people. I love coming to visit you, you are a unique person with such high spirit and I love that. Poetry to me means writing about love in a way 🙂 ? Does that make sense? Big hugs and hope you have a great day!!
October 8, 2010 at 4:02 pm
Fiercly felt. Gently jotted. Lovely.
(And don’t you just love Enya?)
Happy Friday …
October 9, 2010 at 1:19 pm
I love Enya…so talented…hope you have a lovely weekend dearest Jamie xxx
October 8, 2010 at 4:34 pm
It’s a touching poem, poignant with sadness and longing.
Be peaceful my sweet friend.
xxx
October 9, 2010 at 1:27 pm
I am good with the sadness…really!!! Don’t know why I always write with such sadness…it just happens 😦 Just comes naturally. Love you my girlfriend xxxx
October 8, 2010 at 4:44 pm
Oh, dear friend, I yearn with you. xxx
October 9, 2010 at 1:27 pm
I send you the biggest hugs ever!! 🙂 xxx
October 8, 2010 at 5:01 pm
you whisper these delightful words of love Amanda.
then bam right below you tempt me with lovely food!!!
It’s time for bed and I want to eat scallops
Love ya
October 9, 2010 at 1:31 pm
I loveeeeeeeee seafood, with a passion!! Sweet dreams my dear friend xxxx
October 8, 2010 at 8:09 pm
So powerful and”fierce”…goosebumps again.
Magnificent!
October 9, 2010 at 1:33 pm
Thanks so much Susan, I always smile when I see you here…have a happy weekend my dear friend xxx
October 8, 2010 at 8:10 pm
Emotional!! xx
October 9, 2010 at 1:34 pm
Al good darling…all good 🙂 Mwah xx
October 8, 2010 at 8:15 pm
wow!! lovely yaar. i enjoyed reading it a lot :_
October 9, 2010 at 1:34 pm
Thanks my friend, hope you have a brilliant weekend xxx
October 8, 2010 at 10:21 pm
this is an incredibly beautiful poem of deep love. Hugs to you.
October 9, 2010 at 1:35 pm
Hugs right back at you and hope you have a brilliant weekend…biking? Raining here the whole weekend grrrrr 🙂 Mwah xxx
October 8, 2010 at 11:05 pm
another awesome poem. soul touching. your choice of picture always takes my breath away, like your fragrant poems.
you truly are a real artist Amanda. May more and more beauty pour down your fingertips.
thanks for sharing them with all of us.
love.
October 9, 2010 at 1:36 pm
I am so happy to have you as a friend dearest Trisha, thanks for your always kind words. Have a great weekend my friend xxxx
October 9, 2010 at 12:36 am
This is so beautiful…I know he hears your whispers…I hope he sends his love to you on a warm gentle breeze. 🙂 heartspell I LOVE YOU, Amanda 🙂
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxox
October 9, 2010 at 1:38 pm
I always feel that breeze my friend and just smile 🙂 Sending you the biggest hugs and hope you have a wonderful weekend….I love you right back my dearest Heartspell. oxoxoxoxoxxo
October 9, 2010 at 5:03 am
Wow…’golden mirror of my love’…now that makes the heart flutter and skip a beat with its beauty….very fine poem.
October 9, 2010 at 1:42 pm
Love should always be golden, don’t you think? Hope you have a great weekend, can’t believe it’s Saturday already 🙂 Hugs xx
October 9, 2010 at 9:44 am
Such sweet words…who wouldnt fall for it. The love that burns in your heart is unimaginable. Well done, sweet Mandy.
Cheers!
October 9, 2010 at 1:45 pm
LOL…Your comments are always so warm and wonderful, I thank you from the heart!! Have a brilliant weekend my dear Em oxoxox oh…bigggg huggggssss xx
October 9, 2010 at 12:06 pm
So poignant. I love it. Regards…
October 9, 2010 at 1:45 pm
Thanks so much Jhannet, I hope your weekend will be a good one my friend. Love and big hugs xxx
October 9, 2010 at 2:30 pm
what sweet, touching words, mandy! your choice of music for this wonderful piece is perfect. i love it! *sigh* you touched my heart. 🙂
October 10, 2010 at 2:57 pm
Your words touch me so very much also my dear friend…I send you so much love and take care xxx