Life cycle

time we shared
love existed
without any ties
and we lived it
day after day
with offerings of you
the miracle of mind
no need to mourn
the mask of facade
life cycle complete
aftermath of passion
and forward we go

17 Responses to “Life cycle”

  1. Full circle.

    Hope you’re having a splendid vacation. love you lots. xxx

  2. Ah, well, that’s how life can be sometimes… Miss you. xxx

  3. perfect way to say goodbye. very intelligent poem.

  4. Hum…this one brought to mind a number of memories…some more painful than others…it is good to move on I think.

  5. yes, forward indeed. this one has alot of conviction– well done!

  6. very beautifully written.
    life comes a full circle.

  7. Lovely words with a very nice flow ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Feels like goodbye, a little nostalgic but not sad really – a “time to move forward” sort of goodbye. Love without ties is, I think, often the way it works best…

  9. Life cycle that seems endless yet also repetitive. Very thought provoking words and beautifully written, Amanda. Blessings to you…

  10. Hey, how is ur vacation?
    Ur poem is sweeter than ever!
    Love it!

  11. My thoughts are with you, Amanda.

  12. This poem reminds me strongly of a poet called Czeslaw Milosz…don’t know if you’ve heard of him…but there is a striking resemblance to his writing here ๐Ÿ™‚

  13. Great poetry…It’s better to stow away past memories in a safe corner of your heart and move on to experience newer things! Thank you

  14. lifeinarecipe Says:

    A beautiful tribute to the past and hope for the future…I love this poem very much!

  15. Oh yea baby!! With love – mask or no mask – life always moves forward!! And at some pace too!!! ๐Ÿ™‚
    Lovely words to fit in a fiiiine verse… something only you can do !!! Kudos, my dear friend..

  16. And forward we go … well done!

    Yes indeed, I have missed you.

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