Life cycle
time we shared
love existed
without any ties
and we lived it
unashamedly
day after day
with offerings of you
the miracle of mind
no need to mourn
the mask of facade
life cycle complete
aftermath of passion
and forward we go
time we shared
love existed
without any ties
and we lived it
unashamedly
day after day
with offerings of you
the miracle of mind
no need to mourn
the mask of facade
life cycle complete
aftermath of passion
and forward we go
November 8, 2010 at 6:54 pm
Full circle.
Hope you’re having a splendid vacation. love you lots. xxx
November 8, 2010 at 10:56 pm
Ah, well, that’s how life can be sometimes… Miss you. xxx
November 8, 2010 at 11:58 pm
perfect way to say goodbye. very intelligent poem.
November 9, 2010 at 1:23 am
Hum…this one brought to mind a number of memories…some more painful than others…it is good to move on I think.
November 9, 2010 at 3:01 am
yes, forward indeed. this one has alot of conviction– well done!
November 9, 2010 at 3:10 am
very beautifully written.
life comes a full circle.
November 9, 2010 at 4:39 am
Lovely words with a very nice flow ๐
November 9, 2010 at 5:04 am
Feels like goodbye, a little nostalgic but not sad really – a “time to move forward” sort of goodbye. Love without ties is, I think, often the way it works best…
November 9, 2010 at 6:55 am
Life cycle that seems endless yet also repetitive. Very thought provoking words and beautifully written, Amanda. Blessings to you…
November 9, 2010 at 10:14 am
Hey, how is ur vacation?
Ur poem is sweeter than ever!
Love it!
November 9, 2010 at 1:29 pm
My thoughts are with you, Amanda.
November 10, 2010 at 3:47 am
This poem reminds me strongly of a poet called Czeslaw Milosz…don’t know if you’ve heard of him…but there is a striking resemblance to his writing here ๐
November 11, 2010 at 6:41 pm
lovely poem :O)
November 11, 2010 at 11:52 pm
Great poetry…It’s better to stow away past memories in a safe corner of your heart and move on to experience newer things! Thank you
November 16, 2010 at 9:23 am
A beautiful tribute to the past and hope for the future…I love this poem very much!
November 16, 2010 at 7:08 pm
Oh yea baby!! With love – mask or no mask – life always moves forward!! And at some pace too!!! ๐
Lovely words to fit in a fiiiine verse… something only you can do !!! Kudos, my dear friend..
November 17, 2010 at 3:49 am
And forward we go … well done!
Yes indeed, I have missed you.