Maze – Haiku
convoluted maze
tears mixed with mud and blood
dwindled in the dust
©AvdL 2011
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convoluted maze
tears mixed with mud and blood
dwindled in the dust
©AvdL 2011
SEAT OF MY SOUL 
January 18, 2011 at 3:59 pm
Wretchedly sad, my friend.
xxx
January 18, 2011 at 4:18 pm
A lot of sadness in so few words. Well done, nonetheless.
January 18, 2011 at 4:21 pm
very apt for what you are witnessing xox
January 18, 2011 at 7:20 pm
Such sad words Amanda xx
January 19, 2011 at 12:03 am
pain portrayed with utmost perfection.
January 19, 2011 at 12:40 am
I like the haiku, but I’m not crazy about that bloody-eye pic.
January 19, 2011 at 1:35 am
Words and visual telling of painful defeat and surrender. Artfully created mood. Makes my heart break for the hurting souls of the world. Blessings to you, Amanda…
January 19, 2011 at 2:32 am
wonderfully sad…
January 19, 2011 at 3:18 am
Such deep sadness expressed in these few lines.
January 19, 2011 at 4:22 am
Wow, hard-hitting image and words, Amanda, xo
January 19, 2011 at 4:30 am
Very sad and powerful message expressed here.
January 19, 2011 at 7:34 pm
few words..packed with an oceanful of sadness… such is the power of your words, my friend… amazing!
January 21, 2011 at 4:23 pm
Desolate. Tears.
February 10, 2011 at 2:31 pm
that’s got grit to it…there’s experience there. I like it.
Great to see your writings again. been awhile for a while (not in Folsom or anything, just away).
whoa…just remembered it was a haiku. you put a whole story in my head. GREAT job
April 21, 2011 at 5:42 am
The pictures you find are always incredible and go well with your pieces.
Sad, strong piece xxx