Beneath your Beautiful (Haiku)


stealing my senses

sing to me sweet surrender

the roots of passion

©AvdL 2015


9 Responses to “Beneath your Beautiful (Haiku)”

  1. Ah song and verse brought to mind another song…one by Paul Simon’s Something So Right…perhaps because your poem +song reminded me of moments within my own life.

  2. Beautiful and so pure. 🙂

  3. I love this 😀

    • Thank you Thys, so wonderful to have you here. 🙂

      • Always a pleasure. Just out of curiosity, how do you go about sourcing pics for your poetry? They always fit so well with the written word …

      • I think I’ve created a monster many moons ago, always sourcing art and pictures (I do painting too) and have such a huge collection. It’s embarrassing though…my eye forever looking! Thanks for the compliment though…enjoy your week my talented friend xxx

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