MY HEART
My heart does not know how to beat
While sadness surrounds you
It cannot see through
The darkness of your storm
It cannot find its rhythm
While its mate is in pain
Desperately seeking a way
To find you and save you
But it cannot
It can only stand still
Hope that through chaos
You will see it bleeding love for you
♥A POEM WITH SO MUCH MEANING TO ME♥
July 19, 2010 at 8:38 am
Red…I can only imagine where this comes from. But, somehow I know it comes from a deep, deep place in your soul. I know the poet meant it from his soul to yours.
Hearts will go on….
Love,
Tracy
July 19, 2010 at 1:36 pm
Hearts always goes on…thanks Tracy x
July 19, 2010 at 8:53 am
I’m speechless, all of my regards …
July 19, 2010 at 1:36 pm
Big hugs to you ~ oxo
July 19, 2010 at 8:57 am
Wells of love run deep! Sad and lovely . . .
July 19, 2010 at 1:37 pm
Thanks Jamie…I must have had another life before 😦 Think you’re in dreamland now anyway ~ Sweet dreams x
July 19, 2010 at 9:01 am
timeless words.
silence and prayers are all you can do when u love someone but could not help someone.
Cheers!
July 19, 2010 at 1:38 pm
Thanks as always Ji, that is all we can do:) Lots of love x
July 19, 2010 at 10:06 am
OMG !! This was just fascinating, Amanda! I hope neither your friends nor you are in any pain right now.. cuz I would HATE to see your heart bleed…
You have a a lovely pure heart, and that will keep you and your amazing friends (including me :)) cool, calm, and safe from outside trouble…
Many many hugs and kisses to you..
Keep writing, girl!
Hope your week has begun with some awesome brightness..and may it get better and better as it progresses.. 🙂
July 19, 2010 at 1:41 pm
It is indeed Monday afternoon already and you must be in bed (somehow I don’t think so hahahah)!! I am super dooper my friend but thanks for your always kind thoughts. Hope you’re gonna have the best week also:) Lots of hugs and kisses to you……. Mwah xxxxxxxxxxxx
July 19, 2010 at 1:13 pm
Hugs out your way to help you to support and cherish the pain and suffering of your world. Hope you will smile soon. 🙂
July 19, 2010 at 1:44 pm
Thanks my friend…smiles always!! Sweet dreams x
July 19, 2010 at 2:26 pm
WoW…What inspired you? This is a beautiful poem.
July 19, 2010 at 6:16 pm
Love inspires me Keshav….without love…what would life be? Thanks for being here ~ Hugs
July 19, 2010 at 3:06 pm
Beautiful writing. How awful to have to stand by and not be able to wipe away another’s pain.
July 19, 2010 at 6:17 pm
The circle of life my friend ~ have a wonderful week ahead ~ Hugs x
July 19, 2010 at 3:57 pm
Amanda,..you’re good girlfriend!…monday morning reflection…played the song two times…beautiful poem…finding the rhythm! xx
July 19, 2010 at 6:18 pm
You put a smile on my face!! Finding the rhythm for the rest of a wonderful week my girlfriend X
July 19, 2010 at 4:13 pm
Lovely, beautiful poem! All it takes is a pair of eyes to see the love through the chaos! 🙂
July 19, 2010 at 6:20 pm
Thanks Lua…and I could not have said that any better. Thanks for stopping by!!! x
July 19, 2010 at 5:15 pm
not just for u honey… this poem means a lot to all of us… I think all will agree with that 🙂
loved the poem =)
felt the pain 😀
heard ur heart beat 😉
July 19, 2010 at 6:21 pm
You know just how to say the right thing to put a smile on my face and I love you for it!!! Have the BEST week ever ~ Hugs x
July 19, 2010 at 5:49 pm
These words really touch me – it’s so true that sometimes we can only stand and watch loved ones whilst they are in pain. Equally, we cannot always see (if ever) into the hearts of others…nor can people see inside us…and it’s worth remembering that everyone has pain that we can’t see. So, we should treat people gently! Chloe 🙂
July 19, 2010 at 6:22 pm
A lesson for life my dear friend….and we all should remember that always. You warm my heart by being here. Lotza luv ~ Amanda xxxx
July 19, 2010 at 6:23 pm
Those words are beautiful 🙂 This poem is very touching 🙂
July 20, 2010 at 8:52 am
I have missed you Tes…I don’t receive your new postings anymore! Have you moved site? Thanks for visiting and have a great week ~ Hugs x
July 19, 2010 at 8:46 pm
Very powerful, Amanda, and truly from the heart.
July 20, 2010 at 8:52 am
Thanks Jessica, you always make me smile. Hope your week is full of sunshine and love ~ Hugs x
July 19, 2010 at 8:55 pm
I love your words filled with feelings that can”t be spoke within the heart! Thank for sharing 😀
July 20, 2010 at 8:59 am
Thank you for visiting my nook ~ always makes me happy to see you here. Have a great week ~ Amanda x
July 19, 2010 at 9:31 pm
Empathy perfectly expressed. Love in few words. God bless you and your writing.
July 20, 2010 at 9:01 am
Wow, thank you for the hugely kind and thoughtful comment. I am delighted to see you here and will return the compliment. Have a wonderful week ~ Amanda x
July 19, 2010 at 11:49 pm
impressive..
July 20, 2010 at 9:03 am
Thanks, you warm my heart for being here. Have a great week ahead! x
July 20, 2010 at 2:10 am
Such a beautiful and powerful poem, especially the ending. All we can do is love and hope that the person we love sees it. It is so painful when someone we love is in pain.
July 20, 2010 at 9:04 am
Thank you as always for your kind and encouraging words….It warms my heart ~ Hugs x
July 20, 2010 at 7:50 am
It can only stand still, hoping you will see it bleeding love for you
What a powerful image – as we all know, when our dearest ones suffer, we can’t take their pain away,
their pain becomes ours, yet we can’t burden them with more – we can only love and wait beside them.
Beautiful poem.
July 20, 2010 at 9:18 am
Thank you so very much Cindy, your comments always mean so much to me. Forever your friend and fan ~ Amanda x
July 20, 2010 at 7:51 am
Beautiful, melancholy words.
July 20, 2010 at 9:22 am
You are too kind and generous with your words and it warms my heart to have you here. Have a happy week!! ~ Amanda x
July 20, 2010 at 8:38 am
Your words move my soul! What more could I ask for in this moment. Thank-you.
July 20, 2010 at 9:23 am
You being here, warms my heart and makes me smile. Thank you ~ Amanda x
July 21, 2010 at 1:37 pm
Love always prevails….ALWAYS! 🙂
July 21, 2010 at 6:02 pm
I so appreciate you coming here…thanks so very much and have a wonderful day 🙂