I was burned out from exhaustion buried in the hail
Poisoned in the bushes and blown out on the trail
Hunted like a crocodile ravaged in the corn
“Come in” she said
“I’ll give you shelter from the storm”.
Bob Dylan
this is heartfelt emotion,
the image tells it well.
your words flow very powerfully and lovely to tickle readers.
beautiful job.
have a fun Tuesday!
xx
Beautiful images starting and continuing throughout the video, a dream-like series of calm, peaceful scenes of nature, with music morphing from quiet to excited. Your two Haiku verses speak of storms assailing the heart changing into a rainbow of hope… I am bedazzled by your work of art. Thank you for sharing, my friend, Amanda… xxoo… Blessings…
This is just lovely, Amanda. I’m so happy you are finding calm in your soul. That’s the true pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. Sending hugs your way. xoxo
October 26, 2010 at 3:22 pm
I was burned out from exhaustion buried in the hail
Poisoned in the bushes and blown out on the trail
Hunted like a crocodile ravaged in the corn
“Come in” she said
“I’ll give you shelter from the storm”.
Bob Dylan
xxx
October 28, 2010 at 8:36 am
*Tears* xox
October 26, 2010 at 3:41 pm
divine…..first you have to like….good insights….
love all..
October 28, 2010 at 8:36 am
Hugs x
October 26, 2010 at 4:40 pm
The shift – well executed, Amanda.
October 28, 2010 at 8:36 am
Hugs xx
October 26, 2010 at 4:50 pm
strong words again my friend xxx
October 26, 2010 at 5:08 pm
This is such a lovely description, Amanda – the calm after the storm – very well executed! xxx
October 28, 2010 at 8:37 am
Thanks my friend xx
October 26, 2010 at 5:10 pm
Beautiful words and a brilliant description.
~Casey Kay~
October 26, 2010 at 11:45 pm
this is heartfelt emotion,
the image tells it well.
your words flow very powerfully and lovely to tickle readers.
beautiful job.
have a fun Tuesday!
xx
October 28, 2010 at 8:38 am
Thanks Ji, you have a good day too x
October 26, 2010 at 11:48 pm
Beautiful metamorphosis, wildest storm into deepest calm. Love the words and music, awesome image too.
October 28, 2010 at 8:39 am
Thanks my dear friend xx
October 26, 2010 at 11:59 pm
Beautiful images starting and continuing throughout the video, a dream-like series of calm, peaceful scenes of nature, with music morphing from quiet to excited. Your two Haiku verses speak of storms assailing the heart changing into a rainbow of hope… I am bedazzled by your work of art. Thank you for sharing, my friend, Amanda… xxoo… Blessings…
October 28, 2010 at 8:39 am
So happy you liked my friend. Hugs xx
October 27, 2010 at 2:07 am
Strong words.. as always.. 🙂
October 28, 2010 at 8:41 am
Thanks for visiting my friend xx
October 27, 2010 at 2:25 am
its gorgeous amanda! simply gorgeous. that sketch is a masterpiece.
October 27, 2010 at 2:29 am
Beautiful Amanda 🙂
I enjoyed so much,
Peace, xx
Laz
October 28, 2010 at 8:42 am
Peace my friend xx
October 27, 2010 at 3:24 am
Love your imagery here buttercup! 🙂 XX
October 28, 2010 at 8:42 am
Thanks Tekia…much love to you xx
October 27, 2010 at 4:10 am
Really love the poem and the music with slideshow…nice break in my day.
October 28, 2010 at 8:43 am
Thanks my friend…glad you liked the slideshow ….hope your day will be a good one 🙂 xx
October 27, 2010 at 4:22 am
lovely. You are good. Read your post about yr journey.. I too am journeying.. isn’t always easy, huh?
Luke xx
October 28, 2010 at 8:43 am
You can say that again, not easy at all…still trying to work it out though ….I wish you well on yours my friend xoxoxox
October 27, 2010 at 9:06 am
You write such beautiful haikus…such a lovely flow.
October 28, 2010 at 8:44 am
Hugs xxx
October 27, 2010 at 10:20 am
Thanks. I could use a rainbow. – bill
October 28, 2010 at 8:44 am
I’m sending lots of them your way my dearest friend xoxoxoxo
October 27, 2010 at 2:12 pm
Ahhhh! I feel so calm now…
Lovely, Amanda.
October 28, 2010 at 8:44 am
*Heart* xxx
October 27, 2010 at 2:17 pm
your choice of pix is amazing. That pic is simply breathtakingly beautiful.
October 28, 2010 at 8:45 am
Thanks my dearest friend xoxoxo
October 27, 2010 at 2:17 pm
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October 27, 2010 at 2:31 pm
Really lovely haiku 🙂 The lines are very well thought out and a lot is expressed in these short passages. Excellent work 🙂
October 28, 2010 at 8:45 am
Thanks Mark, always wonderful to see you here my friend xx
October 27, 2010 at 4:53 pm
beautifully written! Very calming imagery!
October 28, 2010 at 8:45 am
Hugs DP…and thanks xxx
October 28, 2010 at 1:18 am
Buffeted by the storm, and then calm. Excellent imagery.
October 28, 2010 at 8:48 am
Thanks for the comment my friend xoxox
October 28, 2010 at 2:08 am
Loved it!
October 28, 2010 at 8:50 am
Thanks Cindy x
October 28, 2010 at 4:13 am
I SO love this
October 28, 2010 at 8:52 am
Thanks for visiting my nook my friend xxx
October 28, 2010 at 6:09 am
. . . and haiku descriptions, too cool! :):):)
October 28, 2010 at 8:54 am
Have not seen you around for such a long time…how are you my friend? xx
October 28, 2010 at 7:21 am
This is just lovely, Amanda. I’m so happy you are finding calm in your soul. That’s the true pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. Sending hugs your way. xoxo
October 28, 2010 at 8:55 am
We should never ever stop looking for that rainbow….:) Hugs right back my friend xx
October 28, 2010 at 7:39 am
I nominated you :3
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/
Good luck!
October 28, 2010 at 12:14 pm
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/
how are you?
please vote when you have a moment,
you are nominated, automatically, u win 1 vote,
when you vote for other poets, u win another vote for yourself,
thanks for the attention.
October 28, 2010 at 5:24 pm
simple beautiful and to the point
October 28, 2010 at 10:25 pm
Beautiful thank you
October 29, 2010 at 8:44 am
That’s the great bit about life, you know. Those winds will always subside…
Thanks for sharing.
October 29, 2010 at 9:25 am
Seaful of emotions Amanda.
Sometimes I wonder how can little ladies handle so much emotions.
Nice read
October 31, 2010 at 8:01 am
This is a very vivid and colorful poem and picture that you have coupled with it. Nice job!
November 1, 2010 at 1:30 pm
Nice 1 amanda …
Liked the Video as well …
Take a look at my poetry yard
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/rap-zone/
Hope to see you there … 😉
November 4, 2010 at 10:20 am
Find shelter in the beauty of our soul.
Amanda, I keep meaning to say how impressed I am with the range of musical pieces you present on your site.
xxoo