My Immortal
in roaming streams
of death’s journey
so much
more poignant
to lose a beloved
to the soundless
laugh of love
the scent of
your absence
with ravenous
desires
on mental shores
of solitude
*
my pain wears
the mask
of a virgin
***
©AvdL 2015
in roaming streams
of death’s journey
so much
more poignant
to lose a beloved
to the soundless
laugh of love
the scent of
your absence
with ravenous
desires
on mental shores
of solitude
*
my pain wears
the mask
of a virgin
***
©AvdL 2015
August 20, 2015 at 6:26 am
The pain in these lines is so strong…the words pierce one’s senses…another powerful verse.
August 20, 2015 at 7:34 am
Thank you my beautiful friend x
August 20, 2015 at 7:56 am
The photography, the poem, and the music video are very powerful. And “my pain wears the mask of a virgin” ties everything together. Excellent!
August 20, 2015 at 7:58 am
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your visit and comment 🙂
August 20, 2015 at 8:52 am
Everything about this poem is executed beautifully,
and the ending which your wrote:
my pain wears
the mask
of a virgin
damn! where did you come up with such a brilliant line?
Breath-taking poem. Two-Thumbs way up! 🙂
August 21, 2015 at 6:52 am
This one. Yes. Just yes. Such a powerful, incredible piece. Wow!
August 21, 2015 at 6:54 am
Thank you my dear friend, means so much! ❤️
August 21, 2015 at 6:59 am
Really talented you are.
August 21, 2015 at 7:01 am
Ditto girlfriend 😘
August 23, 2015 at 12:23 am
Wow, this piece is so powerful! Your ending line — just floors me! Just brilliant stuff here! Bravo!
August 23, 2015 at 9:14 am
Thank you for your comment and visit…I really appreciate it x